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Looking Forward

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Not what I would normally post. But it speaks to me in a strange way. I just want to share it with you guys. 
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Hello here from ProjectComment
First of all i would like to say that you made a beautiful natural feeling picture. It really has that 'taken in the moment' look to it. 
The focus is where it should be, and that is on the eye. With this focus you also created a good depth of field. 
Now would i change/ edit this picture if it was mine? I keep asking myself this question. 
Maybe just cut it a little bit out so that the composition would push the eye a little bit more to the right. Or digital extend the background. (stamp it in photoshop) While at it, i would also try to erase the white parts in the sky. Make them a little bit softer. (and make the horizon straight)

Would i edit the colors?  No, they are to natural to change and you would only end up with a fake fasionshoot look.  It would ruin this natural feel that makes this picture feel so real and alive. The only thing darker in this picture are the eyelashes together with that little bit of smokey eyes. Perfectly accentuates the eye. 

I hope you will find my comments usefull. If would like to see my comment visual, give me a sign and i will PM you the edit. 

Kind regards.